Thread:Shanethefilmmaker/@comment-397235-20140904033414/@comment-397235-20140917113721

I like the idea of the nightmare version of Holly telling Isabel everything is her fault (for one thing, the real Holly wouldn't have gone that far). I'm not sure how to work it, though. My plan was to more or less give a nod to how her friends get killed in the other versions of the story (so Thomas shows up all bloody with his skull misshapen, Lincoln's all burnt, Amy's neck's bent at the wrong angle, Nolan's been electrocuted, and Alexandria's face is black and her eyes are bulging like she's been strangled). They're basically all asking her which one of them she's going to kill next. These sorts of dreams would alternate with her flawed memories of Kirk; part of the initial reason she likes being around him is she associates him with not having nightmares.

As for Doctor Who I've already put in a couple references to the show; Kirk mentions it in passing the first day and Violet (Aya Ayano) flips out and starts going on about how much she loves the show. Kirk also comments they do show things on English TV besides it.

As for Sherry, Kirk corners her in the art room with Holly and demands to know if she can see her too. Sherry flips out and asks him what she's ever done to him, before bolting. Holly looks at him and says "You shouldn't have done that." Sherry runs to find Isabel, but finds Alexandria instead. Being out of breath, she manages to yell Kirk and Holly's names before falling over and impaling herself (I liked all the people who mention Mei and then die). Kirk finds her with Alexandria a few seconds later, and she screams at him to call an ambulance (I'm not sure if it's appropriate to put a 999 vs 911 joke in here). They cart Sherry off, and Kirk tries to ask Alexandria what's going on, but she's in too much shock. She starts to answer, but a nurse comes and tells her she needs to take her medication. Later on she doesn't remember this entire conversation. Kirk watches her walk away, then sees Holly watching the entire thing from the school.