Thread:Shanethefilmmaker/@comment-397235-20140829052131/@comment-6052796-20140907051544

That's pretty good. That last part with him shouting in the hallway. I can imagine the echo too if this were adapted. Holly's a bit tougher here than she is in the others. Plus way to go with that stealth pun on the English Nosey stereotype. Not many people would notice that.