Thread:Shanethefilmmaker/@comment-397235-20150127033511/@comment-6052796-20150127035011

Actually the multiple narrations is pretty good. It's a great way for any audience or reader interested in a character they like out of the mains as well as sum up their povs and motives. But if I may suggest, you oughta mesh them together in the end. By that I mean make it so that each one in the end adds a word or two that forms a complete sentance if mashed together. Kirk's monologue would probably be good for a trailer, but the best way if you are going that direction; would be to make it like he's filming a video yearbook entry.